Lets Do Some Marking !

We're needed to mark some writing work from foreign student.

So here are some comment about this student work.

1. His writing has the idea but not express correctly.
2. A lot of grammar mistakes ( punctuations, spelling, ..)
3. Some sentences are not clear ( words missing, inappropriate usage of words )
4. Nice development of story ( the story have the flow in it )
5. The story is lack in some language aspect but still understandable.

So, basically he is able to write a good story. The remaining problem are only this student is probably limited understanding in English. For the mark, our group gave 10/20 !!